Finished reading, and I must say I really like how you write. The prose is very good. Details, colorful description, very good use of your senses, natural feel to your writing, wide variety of word choice, and excellent immersion into the story. Keep it up! I look forward to reading more of that story!
Great job my friend. I'm curious where this story could be going. Your style is very good and I appreciate the way you've laid this out.
Finished reading, and I must say I really like how you write. The prose is very good. Details, colorful description, very good use of your senses, natural feel to your writing, wide variety of word choice, and excellent immersion into the story. Keep it up! I look forward to reading more of that story!